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:icontwilightxmoon:
Jasmine,
I love how you look like a psycho killer looking through someone's door. the focus and sharpness of your eye is beautiful. Although this isn't all that original of a photo, its creative. I feel the lighting is a little to intense and could be dimmed down a bit. I feel one of your biggest downfalls is the lighting in your eye, it almost seems fake. I love the clarity of your eyelashes and the creases of your skin. And the pureness of the white in your eye makes your iris the center focus. Great work well done!
-Leanna
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:iconsteler:
Hmm your right, this reminds me of the short story by Edgar Allen Poe called the Tell-Tale Heart where Poe plans to kill this old dude for like a year and every night he peaks through his door to look at him..creepy :fear: this photo is some what of what I envisioned while reading, but minus the polka dots lol. i should change the title to edgar allen poe :lol: jk, eww.
so anyway 10Q soo much!! :heart: :glomp:

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:icontwilightxmoon:
ha gosh your right

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:iconsteler:
i know, creepy right?
hhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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:icontwilightxmoon:
er now your just acting creepy

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:iconsteler:
im a creepy desperate man, and i want your body on tuna and toasted wheat.

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:icontwilightxmoon:
mm that sounds good

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:iconsteler:
pshh you know i sound good.

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